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Stay Strong... Don't Give Up!
Why? Why is it that you’re always negative?
You always say you can’t do anything
Instead, you should be positive
The tomorrow is a new day to once more starting
Why you are always saying, “i'm a loser”?
Stay strong, be happy. Everyone makes mistakes
Well, we are humans, mistakes are also done by “winners”
But to be so, efforts, dedication and time it takes
God doesn’t make human a loser
Human is the one who makes itself a loser
Don’t give up, that’s what I say
But just don’t sit down and pray
When you trip over in that way
Get up! And don’t cry, no one can stop you
Tears aren’t to use anytime everyday
But its ok for some occasions cry too
Sometimes you ask yourself “what am I doing here?”
That’s a question many may wonder in our community
But that only you can answer, my dear
Don’t know if also you, but I think its all about destiny
- Title: Stay Strong... Don't Give Up!
- Artist: Zitenshi
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ok, i think i dedicated this to a ex-friend :XD
but i really think she will never see this, soo...
i uploaded it here. hope you like it.
any suggetions... and mabey stuff that may rhyme better,
please rate and comment!
note: what i mean in human, is just the people, persons... :P it isnt that all humans are losers... ok? hehehe.... - Date: 09/24/2008
- Tags: stay strong dont give
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sayuri Himeko - 10/19/2008
- ^^good
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- BoubouGurl - 09/26/2008
- I like it when it rhymes, It's cool! Deep meaning to the poem as well, 3.5
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