The maiden in the blossoms

• Artist: Deshi_Venshin594
• Description: a piece i wrote for someone who i was extremely close to. For you information: I'm no longer close to them
• Date: 09/24/2008
• Tags: maiden blossoms

The cherry blossom bloom and blow throughout the mountain country. While thou voice causes serenity to bloom and travel through mine heart. the Cherry blossoms belong to nature and mine heart belongs to thee. For if thou shallt not take mine heart it shall shureth methinks wilt and perish. For thou will have denied it its one true goal to be thou's and thou's alone for an eternity. However, if thou should taketh mine gift mine heart would be overjoyed for thou shallt be its holder as well as the holder of mine self. Thine beautiful language and intelligence hath wroth thine chains around mine heart and my mine self thy devoted servant.

Comments

[Daddy Got This Account]

i like it, its a very well thought over poem. ^^ i like that u used cherry blossoms, its my personal favorite flower. lol. i also like the line, "while thou voice causes serenity to bloom and travel through mine heart." that line has a very strong meaning to me. so please, keep writing! =)