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Looking in your eyes
I feel myself falling in love with you
You said I Love You
And I said it too
We went to our own special spot
For no reason at all
We sat and talked and looked at each other
Then the rain began to fall
We could have left just as quick as we came
But no, you wished to stay in the rain
You asked me a question I'll never forget
Have you ever tasted the raindrops?
I looked at you funny and you gave me a sigh
The cutest look, as I wondered why?
Why did you ask me to taste the rain?
Well what did I have to lose or gain?
I watched you with a careful eye
And did the same as you
You were looking up at the cloudy sky
But my eyes were stuck on you
I lifted my head to look at the sky
And closed my eyes real tight
Just as I thought I'd caught a raindrop
You suddenly held me tight
I opened my eyes with slight alarm
As you kissed me soft and sweet
I remembered that kiss as if it were yesterday
Still feel the raindrop on my cheek
I tasted the raindrops like never before
It was worth every second of bliss
Everytime I think of that moment
I think of my raindrop kiss
We sat close together on one special rock
And we held each other tight
Then almost as suddenly as it came
The sun came out from beneath the rain
The most beautiful colors I've ever seen
Came out on the western sky
The sun was setting, the moment was perfect
More than money could buy
As the sun set slowly and the sky lit up
You began carving our names in our special rock
I told you, I would never forget that moment
In my heart its locked
Our named were finished, forever ingraved
We watched the sun finish its day
We slowly got up to leave this place
Then forever walked away
I havent been to that spot for a year
Where did the time go?
I will visit our place alone this time
And will finally let go
This memory will be in my heart forever
But you will no longer remain on my mind
I do not know If that love, will be seen again
For that love, I can not find
I will go to our spot as we promised we would
But you will not be there this time
Why is it that you cant keep your promise?
While here I am keeping mine
Never again will I taste the raindrops
The way I did with you
And when I go to our spot again
I'll be saying goodbye to you.
- Title: Tasting Raindrops
- Artist: mcsteezy
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Description:
A poem i wrote a while ago
any and all poems of mine can be found on my myspace
myspace.com/ilcadutoun - Date: 09/23/2008
- Tags: tasting raindrops
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Comments (6 Comments)
- mcsteezy - 06/25/2010
- was a while ago...to be honest the feelings never leave...but im glad i could find comfort in the appreciation of another
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- Inu_Fangirl - 06/21/2010
- That's beautiful... I'm sorry for whatever happened.
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- xtinkkx - 10/06/2008
- aww i love it im gunna read the other poems u wrote razz 5/5
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- hopexforxsnow - 09/30/2008
- Wow. To be honest, I started reading this and thought "another cliché piece", but you simply amazed me with the ending. The ending could be a song, seriously. 4/5
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- ohmaigod - 09/25/2008
- wow really beautiful, i love it!!!!
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- Suki Fairy - 09/23/2008
- This is a really cute poem, it nearly made me cry! You have talent.
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