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The words that you say
they are both psycho and vicious.
Who puts who above all
sprinkling words so fictitious?
Your wit shows no candor,
your face shatters in my head.
No grace have you shown
stop skipping your meds!!
The world is no oyster,
at least for you it sits putrid.
The smell of your voice
has brought desolate existence,
all smart sitting coy,
using people as toys.
Who is that that thinks that HE is mighty,
must display power and brawn.
Thinks people who kiss your a** admire
your ideas whenever the light bulb turns on,
but they abscond with sarcasm
that steals you blind,
the fact that ignorance just messed up your mind.
Its a matter of time when the tide shall turn.
When your bottom floor is exposed just to be burned
by the suns non fickle rays that society learns
does both expose and reduce so finely in time,
those who seek shelter in life's watery brine.
- by badguyferm |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/23/2008 |
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- Title: Whatever your name is
- Artist: badguyferm
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Haha Someone pissed me off, haha no worries I'm not psycho
I admit I don't know much about poetry,
I just write stuff that gets in my head
criticism bad or good as long as its constructive is much appreciated
THanks for reading - Date: 09/23/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kampers - 09/23/2008
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oh nvm.......first xD
IMMA GO DOWN...
AND DOWN......
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- Kampers - 09/23/2008
- SWEETT 3RD
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- Amayachi_Mika_Sayomi - 09/23/2008
- That was really good. Look me up in the arenas and check out my poems! You rock, and this is an oh-so-true poem!!
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- Pocket Muse - 09/23/2008
- I really enjoyed that, I really did. Maybe if you typed with commas and used correct punctuation, it would be even more pleasing to read. And oh so true hat poem is. Check my poem, Musings of Cyanide Dreams. You might enjoy it.
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