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My dearest lost love
running around in flowers
her beauty is sought
by the bandits of the heart
she says she loves me
is this all such a big lie?
nothing but hatred?
nothing but a misunderstanding?
She's now cold to me
colder than the winter sky
She must love someone
Somebody other than me
The pain of loving
And the pain of great sorrow
My dear heart of gold
has turned to noting but mud
my reason of life
has now disapperared for good
my honor is gone
seppuku is now my way
so goodbye my love
for you won't see me again...
- by Evil_azn_angel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/21/2008 |
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- Title: Haiku of misunderstandings-boy
- Artist: Evil_azn_angel
- Description: I like writing thse kinds of long haikus,please give me comments to see where I went wrong or if it's okay,I don't mind bad comments....
- Date: 09/21/2008
- Tags: haiku love misunderstandingboy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MegearaErotica - 06/21/2010
- Why do you write 575757... I think if I was to write a long haiku, I would write 575575...
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- Kiryuu Yuuki - 09/21/2008
- Hmm that's really good writing 5/5
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- _daddys_charmed_girl_ - 09/21/2008
- awe its really sweat 5
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- le dharma bum - 09/21/2008
- That's really sweet.
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