a scar that never heals

• Artist: luna from the stars
• Description: read it and find out im too lazy to write a discription
• Date: 09/14/2008
• Tags: scar never heals

she lay's in bed
she cannot sleep
She remembers a past
she rather not
this girl was once ignored
no one saw her
not even her teachers
she never knew what she felt
when she watched thee others play
not until she learned
what friends where
but then her 'friends'
ignored her to
she was hurting
but didn't notice
because of the novicane
of her past
she learned she was being hurt
when she got real friends
at a summer camp
she was hurt
then her pet died
but she hasn't cried
she is alone
her parents love her but,
her father is never home
away on business is wear he is
she dislikes her mum
and her brother is away
to bad novicane wont last forever
and evenchalay she will cry
her so called 'best friend'
abandoned her the most
her past is sad
but still she knows
not to complain
for others have it much worse
she wishes
all the pain in the world
would go into her
that way no one els would be sad
she used to cry at night
but now she doesn't cry at all
she walks the halls alone
and goes home knowing
she must lie
or els her mother will be sad
and tell her father
her beloved father
and she wishes not to share her pain
she bottles it up
but when she did
her happiness was stuck in the bottle too
she never smiles,
if she dose its fake
but she is healing
because she writes it down
she prays no one will find out
who she is
questions unanswered
that she asked at 5
some people ask
never in their whole lives
"who am i?"
"why don't i belong"
"why am i here?"
"what is my purpose in life?"
"why do i exist?"
why she never cry's
is like a million lies
she never smiles
but shes getting better
she can laugh now
she can smile now
she expresses her self
with piano and art
she'll never know her story's told
because she wont know
who reads it
she sighs as the sun comes up
'another night with no sleep'
she prays her journal doesn't
get read by anyone
and she goes to school
mabey one day fully healed
shell be able to feel
more than pain

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

it tells of how someone was once alone then for some time, wasnt. from there a classic betrayal happend to cause more lonliness. yet by perservering, the narrator shows that they are better off alone or found anohter source of happiness. its only long cause the story is told gradually rather than being blunt. i like this piece but please do spell check and such 4/5

[PsychG]

I read a bit of it, only thing I can say is edit. In just the first few lines there were spelling and grammatical errors. In the first sentence it says she "lie's" in bed. That should be "lays" in bed. Because if you say, "lie's" the word lie becomes possessive. If you even say "lies" then it sounds as if, someone is lying. For example, it's like saying "Person A lies." It's like that. Be sure to look over the work more precisely next time.

[luna from the stars]

sorry its so long, how do you like it?