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The moon looked down,
and what should she see,
but a girl crying,
catching the tears that she weeped.
The moon was confused,
and why not,
for the strange child's tears,
turned to diamond as they fell.
Then the moon noticed,
the blood on her hands,
"But child what is this,
what have you done"
The moon was schocked,
when the girl crumpled,
and only then did she see,
what it was she had not.
Upon the girls wrists,
there were slits,
and upon the girls breast,
the crimson continued to spread.
- by Daughter of Elves |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: The Moon and the Girl
- Artist: Daughter of Elves
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Description:
I believe I wrote this sometime between the period in which my father became a heavy drinker and my mother called me a pig. Not sure which however. THis is poem number eight for me. If you like, check out the others. Feedback would be awesome.
- Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: moon girl
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Comments (3 Comments)
- CannibisQueen - 09/12/2008
- I like it, very creative. Espically the story. <3
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- Catie - 09/12/2008
- It's a good idea to write a poem to describe your feelings. I feel bad for you that you have to go through this though D: Hope things get better for you soon.
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- Yrissa - 09/11/2008
- suicidal thoughts.....your mom was wrong calling you a pig..you are a person....Nice poem 5/5
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