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A love lost.
Before you I was nothing,
An empty carcass with no soul,
but you held my hand and my heart began to beat
and from then, my heart had a home.
I may never know you in real life,
nor know what it is like to kiss your lips,
but I am willing to go through Trouble and strife
just for one of your kisses.
An ocean separates us from travel,
and time passes me by before I see your name log on,
however for love alone I come back to see you,
And am greived to see you go on alone.
If we had that one chance meeting, I will be happy
for I would die in your arms,
your beauty and your charms will see me through the day,
and your tender touch would see me through the night...
What I am trying to say is this...
although I may be emotional, I had a rough ride,
Nobody loves me except you.
I love you with all my heart and will do forevermore,
but I fear that you will be gone...
So I look down as you read this poem,
and hope that you will choose me,
for I love you with all my heart
and true love is ours I believe.
- by Ix_Lilinette_xI |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/10/2008 |
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- Title: A Love Lost
- Artist: Ix_Lilinette_xI
- Description: I wrote this for my bf its not a poem its a song and I hope you have someone in your life that makes you feel like i did when i wrote this
- Date: 09/10/2008
- Tags: love lost
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Chrysolas - 04/19/2009
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Lol the second paragraph makes it sound like someone you've never met and across the ocean is the one you love.
But other than that, I like it. Very heart-felt. I can tell just by reading the words.
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- Pure_Dove - 09/10/2008
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Aww i love it~!
It makes me cry a lil...5 starts =D
And hey, read my poems k? i have 5 and i need more feedback..thnx.
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