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A hint of bloodlust lingers in your eyes.
I look into them, I look deep inside.
They glisten with hate, and I twinge in fear.
Is there no sign of life for me here?
I question myself as I question this.
Is mortality real or just a cruel trick?
If I cut myself open , will blood pour out?
If I break myself, will my death leave doubt?
I look to the skies for an answer to hold
They turn me away, now vengeance is cold.
And in the distance, I hear a beckoning call.
It draws me in, hypnotizing my all.
I become a part of this trance.
Waltzing along in a vehement dance.
- by iBrightScales |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: Vehement Dance
- Artist: iBrightScales
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Description:
I wrote this one last night, but I was half asleep so I'm hoping that it's not too bad.
Please comment, and be brutally honest <3 - Date: 09/09/2008
- Tags: vehement dance
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Caleco - 09/28/2008
- for something you wrote when you were tired, i'm very jealos. that's really good. keep them comming
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- Mecca Against Reality - 09/28/2008
- I love this one, another favorite! The syllable count got a little off at the end, but I'll give you a 5/5.
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- Lithumn - 09/09/2008
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great
a real gothic feel,
dark, gothic thoughts expressed into an artistic poem...
a great poem - Report As Spam
- PR1NC3SS T1G3R - 09/09/2008
- It's good. Kinda scary razz
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