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The more I talk, the more I feel so exposed
More exposed than Janet at the Super Bowl
Excuse me if Im a killa to these haters tho
But Im the one with Proto who will have to kill the show
After shows I chill wit uncle as he dealin blow
Help a ***** out gettin coke out the kitchen flo
While we watchin so my kin wont get death row
And his afro will be shaved like Bo-Bo Bo-Bo
So if he does I'll take his place and Ima get mo
And bring it home so I can get my brother school clothes
I have to help my fam I cannot go dirupt the flow
Donate to Lake.J.Michael's where my mom make corn rows
So to my Daddy Ima thank him for having me
From then to now I know he'd like to tuck me into sheets
Instead my mom and the court says that he's been beat
Now for me to see my Father I'll have to go 40 streets
But now I'm makin this album with a lotta feat.'s
So we can go all by ourselves and start stackin beats
Skot has opened me to music oppertunities
And that plus manga man I bet that cash will never cease
And plus the love that I get simuntaneosly
I do it every day my ***** cuz its in my creed
And if you kill me then you do it cuz its in my deed
But you cant cuz im aChristian child its Jesus Peace
Onward to influences that I will meet one day
Thanks to dudes like them niggas named Ross and Wayne
And Pain and Skot and Jezz' and cant forget Kanye
Because they been to Atlanta, and they love it bay
Them bein featured on the album made me really craze
But now they gotta leave to go so we can pave our way
Forever will it be FRACTiN and Protomayne
Call us Outkast cuz we will stay in rap game
Stay a long time cuz I'm all up in that thang
Describe it as if Im all up in p***y mane
I love my girl and to say it I'll never be ashamed
Even though when we make love we just wanna bang
(So I love my girl)
I tell too much. I'm bleedin on the inside
I tell I'm bleedin cuz you bitches always have to cry
I tell I'm bleedin cuz you bitches crampin up my style
I tell I'm bleedin cuz I'm blowin up th ******** sky
I tell I'm dyin cuz I'm spillin everything I love
My thoughts, my dreams and the will from the man above
But I don't wanna die cuz I hold some of my s**t inside
So dont ******** wit my bowels cuz I dont want that s**t to ride
Now lemme talk cuz you cannot describe the way I would
I told my girl if you gon ******** me better ******** me good
I told my homies piss me off you gon get nailed to wood
I bet you never knew that I was so misunderstood
- by AshY_2_cLAssY |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/08/2008 |
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- Title: Misunderstood
- Artist: AshY_2_cLAssY
- Description: Everyone has a song called "misunderstood". Lil Wayne has it on "Tha Carter III", Common has it one "Finding Forever". Why not me? Well, I tried my hand and turns out to be about 3:00 and 4 verses. No hook and no Japanese this time.
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: misunderstood
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Comments (3 Comments)
- StringUP_STRAPdown - 09/08/2008
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Don't listen to the pokemanaic. I was acctually listening to the old OLD song 'don't let me be missunderstood' by Santa Esmerelda. If you look at many songs, without the song playing, the poetry sucks. You threw in a few anime/manga referances, which was nice, but some how felt out of place.
But it works for the self disscription.
I have mad respect for you man. ..
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- different333 - 09/08/2008
- It sucks! What kind of moron would write that way!?! I hate it! Do something truly poetic... Do something beautiful and poetic like the rest of gaia. You creep. Posting that crap on gaia. lets give you a dunce medal. *hands over pile of dog crap*
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- Mr-Mario-JOCK - 09/08/2008
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nice dude hey can u comment on my poem its called those beautiful eyes
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