- when i saw them beautiful eyes. those ones that caught me by surprise.my world changed.i could never stop thinking about them. intill that day came i was walking in the park and those beautiful eyes slid right pass my heart again and i looked right into those eyes. and i felt like my life had a perpose and i thought an i thought how could eyes change the way i felt the way that i thought.i found them eyes and i asked her who are u and she touched my cheak and she floated high into the sky and she said."im ur only love ur only hope ur every dream ur every wish. then she spread her wings and i knew it was an angel an angel i will never regret loving ,hopeing,wishing for, and dreaming about.
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- | Submitted on 09/08/2008 |
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- Title: those beautiful eyes
- Artist: Mr-Mario-JOCK
- Description: this came to me i dont know if its good plz comment
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: those eyes
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- Frosted Cookii3 - 09/08/2008
- oh i forgot. Try to work on versing them and putting them in an order rather than telling a story. Its more presentable and it makes it easier to read.
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- Frosted Cookii3 - 09/08/2008
- You seem to like to broadcast it. Its ok... I'd like it if you rated mine. its called "Knowing Truth from Science-Fic"
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- To Remember A Day - 09/08/2008
- THATV WAS G3WD BUT WORK ON UR GRAMMER AND SP3LLING OTH3R THAN THAT IT WAS A GR3AT JOB!
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