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Everything's spinning,
All things gone wrong.
It seemed so close, yet
It was the farthest it's ever been.
But I knew...
I knew it was out of my reach.
Always.
In the wind I hear the voices
Of times that may once have been.
They died before they could even be seen.
The flower falls to pieces by itself
A single beauty inside a barren wasteland...
But nobody ever saw it bloom, or fall.
It's like it never existed at all.
In the darkness surrounding me,
I hear her once-innocent, but desperate plea.
"Save me," it cries... But such things cannot be.
It is sad. Happiness ends with love, and it is true.
I see that now, and she does too.
And she whispers in her last breaths things she wanted to say
Before the cold wind of the night blows all her breaths away.
- Title: What would have been.
- Artist: Farrelei
- Description: I had an emo moment ^^
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: would have been
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Comments (3 Comments)
- whitejade13 - 01/09/2009
- First of all emo is an abbreviation for emotional really but whatever. It's a very well written. 5/5 smile
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/07/2009
- y does everyone think their poems r emo if they r sad? that was really good and once again not even close to emo
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- Online Violation - 09/08/2008
- Wow that is really beautiful. The structure is really well done and the theme is magical (in a depressing sort of way). It is really well done, although you could elaborate off of this and make it more descriptive and a tad longer. The ending is amazing though. You do a really great job.
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