dragons plight

• Artist: nakav-sonof-the-earth-god
• Description: my story of dragons
• Date: 08/30/2008
• Tags: dragons plight

you all know of dragons the beats of fright.. but why not see them in a diferent light.. sure they are great and big.. flying in the air a useing fire when needed...but how do you know they arnt evil... or not.. there are many things to consider.. like storys of old.... but how can you know the dragons pointof veiw.. and how could you know if the men were greedy..... so p[lease listen here.. for many things adhere.... to the old saying that dragons are beats of murder and death... my side is that men were greedy.. seeking fabled treasures of my great friends.. but what they found was a dragon.. yes a dragon with no treasure.. only his cave.. ande his food be it meat or plants... i dont know.. but they slayed him yes slayed him but found nuaght in his cave... yet they found treasure nearby and thought it was a hoard... so they took it back and thats when all this started! the dragons only flamed in self defence.. but how could you blame it? what would you or you? or you do then? if you were that poor soul?... my story rests here.. but maybe just maybe you belive that dragons will come again without fear... goodby ninja

Comments

[X_Katarine_X]

its quite choppy, but the ideas are there. Its obvious you tried, perhaps we could get together on gaia and exchange ideas? i smell an amazing poem on the rise...

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Hm, this poem definitely needs a lot of work. Many spelling and grammatical errors. Uneven flow. Lack of any good imagery. I am sure it could be good, but it needs a lot of work. 1.25/5.