A shadow of the days gone by

• Artist: Euruss
• Description: This is a poem I wrote, half about myself... I dont think it would make much sense to very many of you... But please rate and comment, perhaps I could post a better version later...
• Date: 08/28/2008
• Tags: shadow

I am the shadow of the days gone by
A distant memory of love once had.
I am the shadow of the days gone by
A faded memory of the friends once loved.
I am the shadow of the days gone by
Once beautiful, but nothing once again.
I am the shadow of the days gone by
Lost deep in the flowing sands of time.

Comments

[2pound]

ok, first of all, get rid of the unreadable text color because i can't read it. so i guess you get a zero or a one, since that's the lowest score you can get. sorry.

[emochic68]

freakin awesome dude love it

[RenegadeFeather]

this is asome keep it up

[AssKetchum]

Deep, very beautiful and well rythmic.
5/5.