A Flower's home

• Artist: Brother Rangmen
• Description: Well, it's my first submission to Gaia.
  Well, I figured this part alone made a good stand alone poem.
  
  Please be brutally honest, if at all possible. I can't improve if you don't point out flaws.
  
  
• Date: 08/27/2008
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While walking through this depressing gloom,
I spy a flower, ready to bloom.
"Why are you here, and no other place?
This place is empty, a lifeless face.
Come with me, there's plenty to see!"

It was then that the flower spoke to me.

"This place that I know,
This face where I grow,
If I chose to leave,
Then where would I go?
This place raised me,
This world I see
Is all that I know,
So why should I go?"

Comments

[snitchezz--]

i liked it,
reminds me of alice in wonderland and i dont know why lol

[Drk_vamprye]

COOL