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Your there for me day or night
I wouldn't trade u from anything, just wanted u to know
In this life ur all i need and all i want
So with this i give u my heart
I may not say this as much as i should but baby when i say i love u i mean forever
Cause with u i can be myself
With u by my side i know ur always going to catch me b-4 i fall
With u is where i belong
I am trying everyday to show u ur the only one for me encase tomorrow never come
But believe this your love is all i need
And i will love u till me last day
So take my hand cause baby i am here for u day or nigh, sun or rain, i am all urs
I will always be here for u, cause i love u more than u will ever know heart
- by Dark Desire27 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/22/2008 |
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- Title: I am Here
- Artist: Dark Desire27
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Description:
I know it's not the longest poem u ever seen, but it's not long it is that matter it's the words.
I was kind of bored last nite and then thought of my boyfriend came to mind so i started writing. - Date: 08/22/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Unwritten Tragedies - 02/01/2010
- I hear the 'day and night' stuff too often, you couldve gone with 'backwards and forwards' and 'heaven and hell' opposites are used too often in here.'In this life ur all i need and all i want' I actually used this piece before, you could use something a bit more enthusiastic and imagery. I could've said you either weren't thinking when you wrote this OR you wrote in a fast fashion unworthy of paying attention to the open spots.
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- iiEuphoria - 12/15/2008
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awww...thats soooo sweet...
reading it made me tink of my BF, who soooo faraway frm me...
nice!!! keep it up biggrin - Report As Spam