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Life is like Water
Not river,nor pond.
It's flowing,yet still
For reasons beyond.
Destiny,a current
As it changes with Life.
We float along silently
Waiting to be heard,
And as Destiny changes
Life soon becomes Pure.
Time is like nothing
We've heard of before.
It's silent,yet steady,
Yet loudest of all.
Time is the ground
In which Life is it's safest,
To flow,yet to still,
To rise,yet to fall.
Pure is there like rain or wind,
It keeps you steady
Love never to end.
With all of these elements,
A masterpiece made,
Not tainted with evil,
To go through the days.
What's beautiful stands where the elements where,
What's beautiful shines like the days morning dew,
What's beautiful talks and sounds a singing bird,
What's beautiful,standing here,blooming,is You.
- by Ricochetra |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/17/2008 |
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- Title: Elements
- Artist: Ricochetra
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Description:
This is one of my first actual poems,which explains why it's so crappy...
I wrote it on a log by a forest,which explains the theme:sometimes we forget just how beautiful we can be inside. - Date: 08/17/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- leeah iss tha name - 12/12/2008
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ill give somthing :]
lol i really like it. it says stuff i can actually understand, lo. im in love with it, haha biggrin u did an AWSOME job, love it!! 5/5 biggrin - Report As Spam
- Ricochetra - 11/02/2008
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still nothing?
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- Ricochetra - 09/12/2008
- Wow,I posted this at least a month ago,still no comments?
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