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Look in the mirror what do you see
is it you or is it me?
Look in closely your eyes burning in fury
you blink once you blink twice everything's becomes blury
You walk the emtpy halls like you always do
Can you feel it? Can you feel it burning in you?
Leaning on the wall to gain support
your becoming so weak your life's growing short.
I see you, standing there oh so weak
you looking up at me not able to speak
I smile down at you and lean to your face
I look within you it certainly takes me to that one special place.
A soft peck on the lips I give you and helping you walk
you opening your mouth trying to talk
I place my finger shaking my head I give you a smile
and then we walk for a while
I help you sit down I take a spot next to you
You lean your head on my shoulder as you do,
You finally say "I'd always loved you"
and I reply, "I'd always loved you too"
- Title: "My ROmanCe STorY Isn'T DeAd!"
- Artist: Rain821
- Description: This is just something I wanted to write...boredom I guess you could call it...I know my writing is crap...so critics...come forth...
- Date: 08/16/2008
- Tags: dead romance truelove emotions
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Innocence-- I Think Not - 03/11/2009
- Awwww. I love it so much. It makes me miss my boyfriend. <3 5/5
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- cookie_577 - 01/10/2009
- this is awsome!25/5! ><
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- Rain821 - 12/19/2008
- AWE Thax! ^w^ I feel awesome lol
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- LadyHellfire911 - 12/19/2008
- DUDE IT AINT CRAP!!! its great you gets a 5/5 ^^
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- shawnielizabeth - 12/18/2008
- its not crap i like it =) 5/5
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