Through My Eyes

• Artist: cupcake_ninja08
• Description: Again i wrote this for another site, and i was wanting to share this with you guys on here, this is a poems about my eyes, I have green eyes, and I was writing what I was feeling at the time, so bash on it, give me a review, but whatever you do not make fun of my work! Thank you
• Date: 07/31/2008
• Tags: eyes green

A hundred times I refuse to cry.

I refuse trying to hide behind my eyes.



All of these endless dreams,

in a circular motion of green.

Trying to escape through my eyes,

making me want to hide deep inside.



All that I hoped for are locked within

these emeralds that I use to see, what

happened to love and destiny.



All of these endless dreams,

in a circular motion of green.

Trying to escape through my eyes,

making me want to hide deep inside.

Comments

[Votaro]

Reminds me of the times I feel a need for an escape but don't fully understand what all I need it from and only after a while would I realize what I needed it from. Sometimes, it would be the computer, other times it would be routine.

[cupcake_ninja08]

thanks!

[Sabaism]

ooh, nice!

[cupcake_ninja08]

Thanks!

[shinitai666]

It's good. I like the rhyme scheme.

[cupcake_ninja08]

thank you!

[babygirl090483]

Nice poem. I like it.