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His melodious laughs meant so much to me
His chocolate brown hair I loved to touch
Why oh why can’t he ever set me free?
Why can’t he see that I loved him so much?
Deceiving blue eyes, leading me astray,
So beautiful, makes me burst into song;
His teasing nature made me feel this way,
His rage a volcano, silent but strong.
Fake smiles, dazzling, mocking me and I know
His voice normal and his caring words lies
Winter has come, silently falls the snow,
Nothing can explain these silent goodbyes.
His name was Dominic, my first and last;
I knew I loved him, but that is all past.
- by defectivecircuitry |
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- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: Dominic
- Artist: defectivecircuitry
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Ah well, seems that I have gone truly out of my mind. This is a Shakespearian Sonnet I wrote for English class. Rate whatever, comment whatever...criticism always appreciated!
(Ugh...it sounds so lovey-dovey....XD) - Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: love poem shakespeare sonnet
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- LuckiWish - 07/27/2008
- Awww! I love iiit. I love the second to last line - not sure why, but it just gets me there. :] Very good!
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