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Holding on to your pillow tight,
Let your dreams take flight!
Take my hand and let me lead
you to this underground dreamland!
I will show you the way
and together we can rule night away!
Together with you by my side
we will always prevail and
we will never fail!
Your dreams are a ship,
ready to sail amongst the stars,
so grab my hand and we shall
fly away so far!
Fast asleep dream of me,
close your eyes and remember,
when you are frightened or scared
that I will always be there!
- by cupcake_ninja08 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: Dream Walker
- Artist: cupcake_ninja08
- Description: Okay i came up with this after I this dream i had, it sorta has a lullibuy type ring to it, anyways, I have this up on another site, and people love my work on there, so I thought I might share it on here too!
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: dreams walk
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Temptingfate - 07/27/2008
- I actually didn't notice the excalmation marks. I liked your poem, the only problem i saw was that i thought it was too short xD
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- Brokenflash - 07/27/2008
- exclimation points ruin it...
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- cupcake_ninja08 - 07/27/2008
- awe but i like exclamation marks! See !!!!!!!!
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- DevilzRejectAngel - 07/27/2008
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I really like it ^__^
conjures up some awesome imagery.
you dont need as many exclamation marks tho sweetie ^^
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