Puppy Love

• Artist: Da Blufox
• Description: I wanted to make a story. Then (some how) the character turned into a puppy and then the story turned into a love story. Then it turned into a sad love story. Honestly I'm not sure myself how it changed. It just did as I thought it up. Tell me what you think.
• Date: 07/26/2008
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I miss my bath, my toys, my shoe, my walk
The days when you would just look at me and talk

We were two peas in a pod, and nothing would tear us apart
But now you get to me when your bored and it breaks my heart

I'm sad now, no joy in even waking you up
Just a bowl of fresh tears and some scraps in a cup

I thought you wanted me, cared and even showed some love
But now I'm as lonely as the ugly bird that never became a beautiful dove

What can I do, whats left for me
No room in your heart for me is all I see

I have become a burden, what else is there for me to say
So as my last gift all I can do is run away

With one more kiss on the cheek and a smile on my face
I will give it my best to keep my inner tears in place

So lay your head down tonight and make sure you dream well
Cause this will be the last time your nose catches this burden's smell

Where I will go will I ever be happy have any more fun
I don't care cause knowing you happy is what allows me to continue to run

.......bye

Comments

[jgirl39]

The syllable counts are a little messed up, but it's nothing that can't be fixed with some editing. It's really sweet.))

[RequiemsAllure]

i find it rather good honestly although there may be a few possible gramatical errors, but then again im kinda disoriented from the drugs im on after getting my wisdom teeth out.... all and all though good job.

[stinkyfrog]

this is really good. and that is how most good poems/storys r. they just change turn and mold into something you wherent expecting. great job!