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Into oblivion
into the unknown
u left me in the open
for my sorrows to grow
forever together
thats what we'd say
but u left me wide open
and put my heart in the fray
forever in a coma
forever asleep
my past comes to haunt me
your memory makes me weep
my heart is broken
my soul is dead
you've taken a gun
and put it to my head
time to run away
and leave you behind
forever together?
hmm not this time
- by UNKNOW dude ii |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2008 |
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- Title: forever is overrated
- Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
- Description: hey if u guys cood tell meh wat u think of dis poem, or any of my others, it wood b greatly appreciated =)
- Date: 07/25/2008
- Tags: theoverlordofamsterdam forever overated
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Little-luv-hearts - 07/25/2008
- I didn't really read it, but it's still good. I like the first bit.
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 07/25/2008
- being in a coma/dying is a medaphor, 4 how i feel on the inside
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- xXxDemonic_ImpressionxXx - 07/25/2008
- uhmm... i kinda like it cuz it rhymes and make sense alittle but i think you should make it more clear cuz your bouncing back and forth to being in a comma to awake and dying.
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