Dear you

• Artist: Your lost angel
• Description: This is a poem i wrote, its about my dad who is an abusive alcaholic, i got out of course but he never changed...and he keept hurting people pluss me, sorry if it seems...too sad or whatever but i thought it might be good enough to get a middleto high vote XD please vote and please leave comments
• Date: 07/23/2008
• Tags: abusedaddearyou

Dear you…


The rain has fallen down,
Lost in the nightmare of you,
How I thought I would drown,
With all the problems and thinking I’d save you,
But it was just a waste of time,
The only one to make a miracle was your repeating line,
And your blame would fall on me,
There was a problem you couldn’t see,
You dragged me down into the dark,
You made my scars a deeper mark,
But still I couldn’t just leave you,
Pitiful about to die,
But you would drag me down too,
Can’t you see why?
I all ready taste my own blood,
If the rain doesn’t stop it will flood,
We will drown in your hurt,
If you don’t stop it will only get worse,
Stop please,
I am down on my knees,
Please?
Love,
Me.

Comments

[vamprisskat]

really good, lots of emotions

[hellobeautiful793]

some of the best poems are the sad ones
this is really good

[Rachmaster67]

It's deep and a horrible thought, but the mixed emotions are what makes it clear to me that you have forgivness and compassion, but yet you have anger and hatred for what has happened. I liked this one needs to be a little less choppy,ok? ^^

[_Kia_kei_]

2nd yay it was nice

[I punish]

W.O.W. i really love this.its so..... i dont know..... the feelings are hard to explain like love but hatred. i dont know. but its really really good