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Faster than light it comes,
Smashing into me.
Impact.
Crying out,
A loud screech in the night.
Collision.
Sirens blaring,
Hurried feet.
Safety.
-Andrea
- by Akumu_Nakamura |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Impact
- Artist: Akumu_Nakamura
- Description: just my favorite poem i wrote from my poetry packet.
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: impactcollisionsafety
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The Master Demonslayer - 07/20/2008
- I agree with Menek, but your style has some future potential.
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- reapersuns manfriend - 07/20/2008
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Overly used cliches.
Keep trying. - Report As Spam
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