.::.Sprouting wings.::.

• Artist: McDinosaurs
• Description: We flew into the sky as free as the wind that took us away
  
  please think as i bear my soul to you through poems.
  
  Theys are diffrent poems. The spaces show where one ends and another beggins. ...
  [sorry for my spelling]
  
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: black wings lust ninja domo

[x] I fu*cking support [x]

To make you smile from the soul.
in my body i dug a hole.
So deep i dug to find my heart had turn to cole.

Soring on wings made of notes
to the heavens my heart and soul
Close my eyes and fly away

In my head there are colors
ringing, ringing in my head
like a song on full blast
sprouting wings and flying off
There are no limitations

This poem needs no words.
Needs no emotion
needs no ryme, no flow, no heart or soul.
This poem needs no words, to speak, to say, to think or read.
So this last time is as beautiful as can be.
.

Motion motion bright a head
fleaing being lost then lead
blinded sighted brining light
far to live on the eage
brining, brining somthing dead
living, lothing, lust then dust
must be fate in motion domokun

[x] profanity b*tch! [x]

Comments

[Stars in their Eyes]

This was a really touching poem, you are truly gifted. biggrin

[NefariousShark]

it's an interesting poem or poems i couldn't really tell . had no idea where i was and the setting transported me from this place to this place so quickly my head spun srry but 3/5

[zerec17]

i like it alot, i thought it flowed pretty good

[supi_kun]

did you purposely misspell coal in the first stanza?
and soaring in the second stanza?
rhyme in 4th?
fleeing in 5th?
what is "brining" in stanza 5, line 3 and 5?
loathing in stanza 5?

sorry about pointing out these silly mistakes, but misspell in college is a serious mistake~ just want to point it out, you know? I don't mean anything bad about it~

but I do like it, it's a very positive poem