Cries in the Night

• Artist: Angel of Windz
• Description: Most of my poetry comes from feelings,but sometimes a word or a picture inspires me.This poem,though,Cries in the Night,comes from a feeling.I really miss someone near and dear to me,and I wish more than anything to be with him.This poem shows just how much...I guess...Yes,there are repeating lines,but I did that for a reason ((and because I was braindead slightly. xD ))
• Date: 07/19/2008
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Every night
Silence fills the room
Pale moonlight pouring in
Through the cracks in the curtains
Only one sound can be heard
Soft sobs, gentle cries
From the girl in the bed
She whispers a name
The name her heart keeps calling for
Tears sweetly rolling down
Those soft, rosy cheeks
Her heart cries as well
Longing for the whispered name
Yearning for his touch
As she cries herself to sleep

Every night
Nothing makes a move
The blinds on the window
Blocking most of the light
Only one sound can be heard
Soft sobs, gentle cries
From the boy in the bed
He whispers a name
The name his heart constantly cries for
Blinking the tears away
But still some slip through his attempts
His heart cries as well
Screaming for the whispered name
Tortured without her warmth
As he cries himself to sleep

Once asleep
Their hearts become one
Together in the dream land
She smiles at him
He smiles at her
And their hearts cease their crying
The wind in their dream
Blows soft petals on the breeze
Swirling around them
Engulfing them
In the soothing cyclone
As they hold each other close

Night becomes day
And day to night
Time is nothing
In this mystical world they share
He kisses her lips so tenderly
And she can’t help but blush
But reality catches hold
Stealing them from their paradise
And once again
Their hearts cry out

Comments

[animewolf16]

Beautifuly written. I love it.

[The Sharpie Prototype]

Very pretty. Nice use of adjectives. There's just this line that bothers me. 2nd stanza, 4th line, "Blocking most of the light." Idk, it just doesnt flow well for me. Other than that, this poem was great. My favorite line was 2nd stanza, 13th line, "Screaming for the whispered name." It totally doesn't make sense in the real world, but in poetry it's very artistic and makes complete sense. Great job, I look forward to more work from you. 4/5.