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Many emotions fill my mind,
Too many things, so little time.
So many emotions I feel about you,
Can't tell if your lying about what's true.
I can't stand the way I feel now,
Your making me cry, scream, and shout.
I'm falling deeper into never-ending blackness,
The blackness of death, regret, and sadness.
Falling so deep, no one to save me,
In a state of panic, no one to love me.
In need of someone to rest my head on,
But I'm left alone, till I am nothing.
I look up at the light, see you there standing,
All I see is you standing there laughing.
Laughing at what I say, what I do,
You think I'm a joke, and a failure too.
But as I try to tell you that I need help,
I'm falling deeper, into the bottomless hell.
No way to explain how I feel,
No way to fix the scars and heal.
I try to get a grasp of something, please
Get back up on my hands and knees.
But I'm falling, falling, until I'm gone,
I lost this foolish game, be happy. You've won.
- by candylicious watermelon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Falling...
- Artist: candylicious watermelon
- Description: A little poem I wrote about one of my recent ex-boyfriends.
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: falling darkness emotional
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BellaXEdward_forever - 03/21/2009
- Most of all I love the ending. 5/5
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- Keniqua - 01/26/2009
- wow..great job i love it
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- pinkFEARME - 07/18/2008
- AMAZING! Really good!
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- aqua282836 - 07/18/2008
- wow. your poem was really good! a bit depressing and sad but it was still good.
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