nobody knew her

• Artist: LunarDaughter61
• Description: a poem i wrote awhile ago describing partly wat i've been through and hope to recite one day globally when i've made my dreams come true
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: demonizedccher51

They say they knew her after she finally made it.
When in middle school no one knew who she really was. They had their fun at her. But because they were so mean she couldn’t open. So she became cold little teen, it wasn’t just that she crashing into the real world and no one could help because of her on sadness swallowing her whole she lost her way in a sea of darkness.
Everyone said she couldn’t do it except her family and she thanked for all they did for.
But sadly no friend or foe
Knew her they never asked some, some she just couldn’t because of her fear of not being accepting for it or they wouldn’t understand.
But she made it through did some something’s she couldn’t do b4 and something’s she planed do all along.
And people who say they knew her didn’t even know her name.
How do I know because I am that girl.
And my name is…
charleenclayborne
aka demonizedchar51
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Comments

[iEpic-Face]

What I like about it: I like the theme. A girl alone with herself finally being something of success. This could be set in many things. Theatre, job and many other things.
What I don't like:
Well you didn't try your best in typing. So yeah it's not the most well typed document.
Changes:
Spelling, Grammar, and possibly some punctuation.

[hot club1]

i like it is so cute