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Death
you don't know me like you used to
you say you know me well enough
yet some how every minute you seem confused
learn the truth and leave
just like the rest did
watch me sit here and let out all my greive
tears to blood
the cold sharpness of the blade
letting the sweetness flood
darkness yet no light
watching the others live
while I fade into night
the goddess of emptiness
welcome me into her home
making me feel at ease
the black rose
the thorns that lay upon
with the blood of hose
what will become of me?
how will this all end?
please just let me flee
let the darkness take over me
the emptiness hold me by its side
and loneliness care for me untill I die
- by hazuki-chan_14 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Death
- Artist: hazuki-chan_14
- Description: Well this poem i wrote to go with one of the characters in one of my stories, this poem is also so in one of my journals. she was normally alone and people would just leave her because of what her mom did. so wrote this poem about her. i hope you enjoy it and give me good compliments. this is my first time entering in any arena so enjoy. oh if you are one of my friends and you know about my characters this one is alex.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sexy-RAWRZ-ya - 06/04/2009
- i thought it was really good!
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- bigprodigy - 01/02/2009
- nice poetry n wow!
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- Hannah Starz - 07/17/2008
- I love it! It flows beautifully! Wonderful!
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- death on dark wings - 07/17/2008
- one line "darkness yet no light" broke the flow i thought
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