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As the sun sighs its last golden breath,
And the daytime sky turns to a dark hue,
The golden sun will die another death,
Only to be reborn to life anew.
But do not worry or fear, my dear child!
Look up at the sky and see glistening lights above
For the night is still young and wild
To see the beautiful stars made with love.
Let us graze in the beauty of the night,
For nature’s lights will not be out for long,
And drink in the beauty of the light,
For dawn’s breaking and the stars will be gone.
As the newborn sun shines its golden head,
The moon lies down on its eternal bed.
- Title: Twilight's Breaking
- Artist: abcdeummm
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Description:
This is actually a sonnet. It was an assignment that I remember being majorly annoying, but I finally figured out the structure of the sonnet, and I think it turned out quite nice~
Please Comment and rate fairly~ - Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- rythemguy - 07/17/2008
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sooo lovely
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- The Red Geisha - 07/17/2008
- I wish I could write poetry like that. Mine always comes out corny -_- Anyways, 5 starts!
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- Fakushin Danaraki - 07/16/2008
- That was a great sonnet.u r an awsome writer
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- LittleNara00 - 07/16/2008
- I love it! You're really good..unlike me. Anyway, very nice! ^_^
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- Eternall-X-Darkness - 07/16/2008
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I LAHV IT!!!~~~
Hehe^^
The Words are soo Beautiful and Mystic.
Its like it was by .. iunno.
but i luv it. Goodluck!! - Report As Spam