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I'm waiting
Waiting in a world
That's Black and Blue
Waiting in loneliness
Waiting for you
There's nothing to say
Nothing to do
In this world
That's Black and Blue
The colors of sadness
The colors of you
The way I'm waiting
I'm sad and blue
Isolation
That's what you do
I've been waiting
Waiting for you
Together we can rid
This world
That's Black and Blue
You have to come and rescue me
And I'll rescue you
That's what we plan to do
To escape this world
That's Black and Blue
Together we'll fly
Fly away from you
From the monster in our hearts
That's Black and Blue
It swallowed me
It swallowed you
But together
We can defeat the monster
That's Black and Blue
Because you're with me
And I'm with you
Our love has defeated the monster
That's Black and Blue
We're escaping the world of
Black and Blue
Because you're with me and I'm with you
We have defeated the world
That's Black and Blue
We're flying away
In the sky above
To land of joy
To the land of me and you
I'll thank you
And you'll thank me
For rescuing each other
For loving each other
For being together forever
And for escaping the world
That's Black and Blue
- Title: World That’s Black and Blue
- Artist: abcdeummm
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Description:
Well, first off, I wrote this poem a couple years ago. I remember writing right after I finished reading a particular manga that happened to take place in a similar world, and the characters faced a similar situation. Except, there's no hairy spiders in my poem, so maybe not! Anyway, here's my poem: The World That's Black and Blue.
Please comment and rate fairly~
(and, in case you were wondering, the manga was Sugar Sugar Rune) - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: black blue world darkness monster
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LittleNara00 - 07/16/2008
- It's really good! You got skills my dear! lol! Anyway, I love it!
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- METRO SKiiES - 07/16/2008
- I think it sounds nice, but you could probably be a little more careful with the rhyme scheme. It falls apart every once in a while but I think it's a nice start and could be a very good poem.
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- Mistahtokyo - 07/16/2008
- Well, overall, the poem's pretty good, although you repeated 'That's black and blue' a liitle too much. Still, I give it five stars :3
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