hated

• Artist: smile_andwave_girls
• Description: just a poem i did when i was ten i think just found it in my old diary thought it was pretty good for the age when i wrote it
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: hated

the girl in the corner that everyone hates,
dressed in red and black,
a dimple on each cheek you see when she smiles,
but thats an unusual sight to see,
the girl sucluded in her little corner,
with no one to speak to but herself,
in bed alone at night is where she cries,
she opens the curtains to see the midnight sky,
then is when she whispers why.

Comments

[A t e l i c E n i g m a]

this is really good. 5/5

[ninja-kyoko-chan]

same here

[snowyjoe]

i agree with lucifer

[Lucifer Traum]

It's an interesting piece, I think its good for the for age, you can probably do a good bit more now.