The profacy

• Artist: Natasha957275
• Description: I wrote this for a story I am currently writing.
  The girl doesn't fit in but gets invited to an odd school. Filled with students like her; but the school is in trouble and the profacy says how to save it and the world.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: profacy magic story writing

5 who gather power from earth and space
1 who seems out of place

5 will go round and round
1 will stand upon the ground

5 will sing and chant thy name
1 will sing for peace to rain

Comments

[Kateryna of Kyiv]

What is it like a power ranger thing or something?

[Kinav]

All I have to say is if It's for a story, I wish you good luck and have fun. For being short, it is good. smile

[Ryan Russell]

Well, first of all its spelled "prophecy."
Second, I think you mean "reign" on the last line, and not "rain."
Other than that, I have nothing to say other than that I would expand upon the poems before entering them in the arenas. Good luck with that story!