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Do I look happy,
Do I look glad,
Can you see me,
Behind my facade?
Did you feel me tremble,
When I felt your touch,
Can you see my soul,
Covered in tears?
You think you know,
You think you understand,
What is it that you know,
Have I been that careless?
Have I slipped that far,
For you to know,
For you to truely see,
Is it desturbing,
Let me know,
For I've forgotten me.
- by tandem_echo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Can you see
- Artist: tandem_echo
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Description:
I like poetry that stirs emotion, don't you?
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- OMGLAVASAUR - 07/16/2008
- its good i like it ^_^
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- Hane no Kori - 07/16/2008
- Good emotion, yes. And the idea is good. But, spelling and grammar needs to be fixed... and you need a few more question marks than you have.
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- OoOCrystalMoonOoO - 07/16/2008
- There seem to be alot of people who write the exact things I feel...I like so much I wish I wrote it XD
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