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If I had one wish,
I’d want you to be near.
To make me smile,
Even when nothing is clear.
But I know very well,
That you must fallow your call.
Even if that means,
Leaving me as my tears fall.
War is a terrible thing,
Bring nothing but pain.
My heart aches for your return,
To cover me from the rain.
Losing something precious,
Fills you with emptiness.
I should know this all to well,
Cause your death has me breathless.
By: Darkfairy1313
- by Kid0blivion |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: War
- Artist: Kid0blivion
- Description: So technically, this is based on my french poem "Guerre"(war), which is based how people feel after or losing someone close to them to a war. Or just having someone in the war. If you want to see my french version (which is better), leave a comment. Thanks!
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: wars sadness death tears
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Poison tigerr - 01/29/2011
- its so realistic =)
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- Frozen Lake - 12/14/2008
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It is not out breaks of war in the world, but out breaks of peace?
Conflict is something we all must have.
1/5 I don't enjoy War Poems...
Time to point out spelling mistakes
1. "fallow"
Hey, look at that, only one.
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- Casca 7 - 07/16/2008
- pretty good
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- Winry_Rockbell799 - 07/16/2008
- Nice images here, like the rain "death has me breathless" nice poem. 5/5 smile
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- account_mod09 - 07/16/2008
- Amazing
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- breebree27 - 07/16/2008
- OMG THIS IS SO beutiful
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