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Perfection at it's best
these lies come so easily
a mix of truth and tales
combine to form deception
a configuration of words
slowly stabbing a wounded heart
buying your words
for what little they're worth
tears touch cheeks
of a pale bitter face
and slide down
to burn broken lips
painfully awaken
from a dram of distress
only to find it's my reality.
- by Jypsi Queen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: My Reality
- Artist: Jypsi Queen
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Description:
Something I wrote a little while back, when I was going through a very difficult time......and, this is NOT about an eating disorder like everyone who reads it seems to think!
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: depression life fear pain bipolar
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ShugoCharaRoxMySocks - 07/16/2008
- thts beautiful!!! i undrstand ur pain. lol
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- -lady hird- - 07/16/2008
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<3 luff it.
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- januarypriestess - 07/16/2008
- i love this kind of poetry! this one is representing me too! i hate when i'm heartbroken! and i'm like that so many times... sad i love your poetry! well done!^^
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- angelbaskets - 07/16/2008
- Not sure why someone would think it is about an eating disorder. To me it speaks of the pain of being lied to by someone you love and trust. Great job sweetie!
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- Dellanora - 07/15/2008
- i think the eating disorder misconception comes from the part about perfection at its best. i think u did a great job, especially with the choice of words!
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