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"They" say
Never leave the one you love
For the one you like
Beacuse the one you like
Will leave you
For the one they love
But what if
The one you like
Loves you
And your heart
Longs for the one
You left
Now what do
"They"
Have to say
- by silent-tears-02 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: "They" Say
- Artist: silent-tears-02
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Description:
my poem from an unknown friend of mine
(and no its not plagiarized ><) - Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- i-love-huggs - 11/25/2008
- what was that last guy talking about O.o
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- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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Actually, this is better than it looks - and believe me it looks like s**t.
It reads neat; actually.
Of course, it all amounts to nothing if there's nothing to interpret. All in all, a barebones piece that reads neat.
You should really adapt the structure, and make it about a situation that doesn't suck so hard. - Report As Spam
- Midnight Slytherin - 07/15/2008
- Pretty good actually.
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