Destined Souls

• Artist: Shackled Soul
• Description: This is a poem I made from thinking about that special person. Inspired by a classical song and my love for her, I created this piece.
• Date: 02/09/2011
• Tags: destined souls

Destined Souls

As I lay in my bed
Thoughts begin to run through my head
Wishing and dreaming
Suddenly gleaming

Imagination takes over
It projects images of you and I

As I dream there's a beautiful blue sky
With clouds passing over the warm sun
Here begins our fun

Laying next to one another
Wanting to abide
Side by side

We see each others face
Our hearts begin to race

A calm wind begins to pass
It brushes through the trees
It brushes through the grass
It caresses your hair as we begin to stare

My soul is filled with glee
A connection we cannot see

I move to you
As you move to me

The innate feeling of bliss
I will never miss

Our lives were meant only for this
We touch . . . we kiss

Comments

[Shackled Soul]

She blocked me from her life, she's never seen this poem.

[Sicerin]

awww thats a beautiful name!!! I hope you and her have many happy years =D

[Shackled Soul]

Her name is Sylvia

[Sicerin]

5 from me =D

[Sicerin]

Ok before I say anythign its a lovely poem I love it. Ok now that i stated that her are some things you could do to make it flow better. first don't change your rymeing scheme mid way through the poem, Second in the third stanza you shoulda moved up the first line of it to the second stanza to make the third a couplet Rymeing between stanzas is ok but highly unadvisable all in all It is a wonderfull poem. Whats the name of the special person you made this about?

[dude your truck]

Beautiful ; u;