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I KNOW I AM A LOT OF STRESS
I KNOW I ALWAYS PRESS
I KNOW I MAY NOT BE EYE CANDY
BUT THAT’S JUST SOMETHING THAT’S HARD TO BE
POETRY THE ONLY WAY I CAN EXPRESS
HOW MUCH I NEED YOU I CANNOT STRESS
PLEASE REALIZE THIS
YOU ARE THE ONLY THING I EVER MISS
I LOVE YOUR SMILE
AND YOUR WONDERFUL STYLE
THE WAY YOU DRESS
THE WAY IM ADDRESSED
THE ONLY ONE I CARE FOR
WHY WOULD I WANT MORE?
THE ONLY I WISH TO DATE
THE ONE I WILL NEVER HATE
I MAY BE CRAZY
I KNOW IT MAY BE CHEESY
I MAY BE OUT IF MY MIND
IM LOOKING FOR SOMEONE I CANT FIND
AND THEN YOU WHERE THERE
I WAS HAPPY TO BE WITH YOU
IM GLAD THAT IM NOT ELSEWHERE
BUT HERE WITH YOU
I HOPE THERE WILL BE LOVE
BETWEEN ME AND YOU
- by ULTIMATE Criz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/17/2010 |
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- Title: LOVE's A MESS
- Artist: ULTIMATE Criz
- Description: A poem i felt like writing i love poetry its my first entry so enjoy my poems are usually dark and depressing so this one is about love please rate and leave and comments or criticism...
- Date: 03/17/2010
- Tags: loves mess date poem ultimate
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Comments (7 Comments)
- pandaashley - 04/06/2010
- biggrin its cute and true .
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- xTheBushBabbiix - 04/01/2010
- Thats hawt. razz
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- Mini Haji - 03/27/2010
- Me TOO!!!
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- Dyzzi - 03/24/2010
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O RLY?
8D
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- ULTIMATE Criz - 03/23/2010
- *in a sarcastic tone* because everyone knows how im totally gay for christian LOL
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- Dyzzi - 03/22/2010
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Only because I have a suspicion that this poem is about Christian, you get a 5/5.
xD
Kiddinh, kdding.
5/5 for being creative with your rhymes / off-rhymes, and the choice to use all caps (makes for a nice effect)...
....and for having a man-crush on Christian.
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