True Suicidal Thought!

• Artist: cupcake_ninja08
• Description: Okay this sounds really gothic and emo, I wanted to write a poem from a perspective of someone who is suicidal! This may offend some people, if it does I am sorry, but please don't bash the poem, please rate and comment fairly! Thank you!
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: true suicidal thought

Cutting my wrists with a razor so dull and rusty,

the smell so enticing and musty

The blood flows down my arm,

I don't even care if I am doing myself harm!


The darkness around me and all my evil thoughts

that my tormented heart has bought,

of flesh, blood, and rot!

The true side of suicidal thought!


The blood so red and hot is spilling out,

I smile wanting to laugh out loud!

I watch the pool of red grow all around me,

I don't even care that I am dying!


My eyes are bleeding tears of blood,

of hatred and not of love!

Everything I see turns red,

a sign that means I soon be dead!


Now my corpse lies on the floor,

with a puddle of blood flowing out my door.

I look down and see upon my face,

a smile not of pleasure, but a frown of disgrace!

Comments

[Creepy Gabriella]

Wow very well written and I love the emotion in it.

[Leik-chamma]

Cool. I like it. Very intriguing. I mean, yes, it's a bit gruesome, but I think it's cool how you seemed to rhym it in a rhym-scheme that seems kinda light-hearted, but still the message of the poem exentuates despair and masochistic feelings. Very nice XD