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My precious ones,
so brightly coloured.
My beautiful roses,
for my eyes only.
I care for them,
love them when alone.
My rose garden,
holding My cherished ones.
One starts to wither!
is it My fault?
what do I do?
what have I done?
My garden slowly dissolves,
turning to ashes...
I'm all alone...
Nothing to love,
Nothing to love me....
- by Avatar_Aiko |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: My Rose Garden
- Artist: Avatar_Aiko
- Description: This poem describes a feeling of isolation and how people can sometimes become possessive of their loved ones in fear of loosing them. It expresses how they treasure those special people and cant stand others getting close to them.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: rose garden
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Comments (5 Comments)
- B-B-B-BeanCup - 12/05/2008
- Why did you capitalize "My"? Why is the transition of one withering to your whole garden dying so quick?
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- Avatar_Aiko - 12/05/2008
- its not jus bf/gf relationships, it can be friendship 2. n ty 4 comments.
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- Quzo - 12/05/2008
- Yes some people become very obbsesive about their gf/bf and when their other half looses intrest they get very depressed. I know how it goes. You date someone for a few monthes you or they get bored and you move onto the next person...but yeah great poem. smile
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- Korean Chopsticks - 12/05/2008
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LOVELY
AND I CAN ACTUALLY FEEL THIS EMOTION IN THIS POEM
THE ROSES ARE SYMBOLIC OF FRIENDS ;D - Report As Spam
- Zoku Zetsubou - 12/05/2008
- awsome wink
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