- We try not to cry as you die, you start to see a light oh so bright, the chains around your heart grow tight and you start to lose the fight, our lives start to part from each others, we kiss and say well miss u
- by Yami Yufakai |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: ill miss u
- Artist: Yami Yufakai
- Description: why must we die so soon
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: miss love soul part
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- Magnifique_un - 11/28/2008
- I think you could have changed all the we and well to I... You know what I mean? It could have had a much stronger connection to the reader... Other than that this is some piece of work! smile
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- meow22234 - 11/28/2008
- Love it! ~Yamii-kun!
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- Annelean - 11/27/2008
- Death is such a... I just loved it... simply loved it...
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- RabuLabu - 11/27/2008
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very nice
ur very deep my friend - Report As Spam
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