When You

• Artist: XxMoonlit BellaxX
• Description: A Poem about a girl who loves her guy best friend, but her guy bestfriend loves another girl. So what else could she do? Nothing
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: heartbreak love pain

When you tell me that you like her
I cheer you on, because that's what friends do
But can't you see the crack in my heart?

When you ask her out
I wish you all the luck in the world
But can't you see my tears that fall?

When you talk to her
I know you'll win her precious heart
But can't you see you've already have mine?

When you hug her tight
I take the picture for you
But you can't see I wish she were me

When you kiss her lips
I tell you that you're very brave
But you can't see the pain that broke me in two

When you tell me you love her
I wish you happiness with her
But you can't see that I'll love you forever

When you two break apart
I comfort you, and say "everything's gonna be alright"
But I can see that this cycle will begin again,
where I am never her

Comments

[KrazieAzn]

Wow. Very good. I thought it was sad, but I didn't cry. If I was someone other than me, I probably would have though. Great job.

[Special Agent Odd]

wow... that was sensitive and insitefull, i just cant comprehend that so much talent and meaning can be put into a simple little poem. i love it. 5/5.

[XSkybreezeX]

Love it there is a bit in this that i think that every one can relate too 5/5 biggrin

[-be still thy heart-]

sad...

[mecrazycinny]

Beautiful... Some parts really rang true to me.

[SpatialHeather]

lol, i'm so in this situation... its like i could've written it myself. nice smile

[Valgee]

A good poem but an old one. MAny many many like this have filled my inbox starting with FWD: and ending with "Love story! read this! its soooo sad" They never get old and I liked yours but still they are old. Many have said its deep, it isn't its straight forward and to the point. Deep would mean a hidden meaning or make you think. Well written oldie but goodie 4/5.