Death's kiss

• Artist: xXxXxbabexXxXx
• Description: I wrote this just a couple days ago..........not exacty sure why, but what the hell! So I hope you guys enjoy it, and please tell me what you truly think of it! ^_^
• Date: 07/24/2008
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Death's kiss

by Desseray (ray ray)

to free the one whom your love imprisoned
would require something completly romantic
and pure inlitenment of the soul
a kiss so harsh, yet so mellow
to kill a mockingbird would bring more sorrow than this
so please bring me my knife, bring me your fathers gun, bring me anything to make this quick
to free me, the one whom your love imprisoned
would require something with great strength
and a black soul
a kiss so harsh, and not a least bit mellow
to kill a mockingbird would be pure childsplay compared to this
so please take my knife, take your fathers gun, take anything to make this quick
only death's kiss may free the soul of a broken heart
only death's kiss may heal the pain you inflected upon me
only death's kiss may save me now
only death's kiss may touch my cold lips

Comments

[Hakyoku Inmetsu]

it's a good poem. it deserves a 5/5 no doubt.

[Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels]

I love how you rhyme your words so wickedly.
It is nothing but truth spoken. lovely. 5/5

[Snake1022]

wow great poem babe

[Hammyeg]

its a good poem dess