Those Eyes

• Artist: Mr_Blackdragon
• Description: Well, this poem is about a girl I know who I felt very strongly for. Um....I don't really want to go much further than that. Sorry. ^_^;; But yeah. It shows like what came over me when I saw her, and looked into her eyes. And no, I'm not telling the color. Keep that a mystery. ;O
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: those eyes

When I see you, I feel the pain.
The agony of knowing it's you I may never gain.
When I see you, I want to cry.
When I'm away from you, I want to die.
But, when I look into those eyes, away goes my grief.
And soon, my heart is filled with relief.
Those eyes are as magnificent as the sky above.
Those are the eyes of the one I love.
They let me know everything will be fine,
And they tell me the slim chance that she may soon be mine!
When I see those eyes, I am dumbfounded.
Yet, at the same time, I am astounded.
Her voice, like a thousand angels playing a thousand harps.
When I hear it, my heart stops, then eventually restarts.
Ah, my soul celebrates then cries.
All these emotions, when I look into those eyes.

Comments

[Unique person]

Awww, I think this poem is cute and very good with consistency, and it made me go "Awwww... And great consistency," in RL -^_^-

5/5 bud!

[Mr_Blackdragon]

Lol, not so much. I've never actually given her the poem. mad

[billybobjoepicklefreddy]

this is a great poem :3 it makes me wish i had a guy like you lol she must be very lucky ;D 5/5

[Fire Rock Angel]

dude its really good its very passionate check mine out

[Mr_Blackdragon]

>w< Damn it Sloan! >:U

[Another Royal Tenenbaum]

So there IS a creepy sweet side to ya. ;O *lavishes poem in 5's*

[whatwhat47]

i agree with Rawr Kittehs GOOD JOB