While Death Awaits

• Artist: AlmostAshleigh
• Description: i dunno what catagory to put this in, so i just put it in this catagory.
• Date: 12/19/2009
• Tags: death awaits

She hits me once,
Hits me twice,
I fall to the ground,
Though not for long,
She grabs me and holds me up to the wall,
I can't breathe,
She's choking me,
I faint,
Though I wake up and she's still kicking me,
I cry out in pain,
she leaves me there bleeding...

Comments

[SHWATYRED]

i think u should do something and stand up for yourself

[Freefalling-Into-Oblivion]

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! biggrin

[sweetie12434]

THAT... WAS SO... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[inking the world]

I agree with the person below me but other then that great!!!

[the posiden]

i think at the end u should put:while death awaits