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My name is Chrissy, and I am three.
My only wish is that my daddy would love me.
Then maybe, just maybe mommy would hug me.
He made me blind so I cannot see the bruises and blood all around me.
I guess daddy hates me, cause’ he hits me real hard.
Yet still no one see’s him throw me around the yard.
Yes, daddy’s drunk, and harshly mad.
Yes, mommy’s crying, I can tell she’s sad.
I run to the door but it’s locked. I fall to the floor and hear a loud gun shot.
Mommy gets quiet, as does everything.
I hear daddy become still.
Daddy yelled for me to shush.
But there is still the rush of words, “Mommy? Where’s Mommy!?”
He kicked me and hit me and made me say sorry.
But then I knew it was far too late.
My cries grew dull, and now I no longer have to lie.
I’m motionless and numb as he says his cruel goodbyes.
Down I go into the icy cold river, no more shall I shiver.
Because my name was Chrissy, I was only three.
That was the night daddy murdered me.
- by Kaylee Ukulele |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2010 |
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- Title: Chrissy
- Artist: Kaylee Ukulele
- Description: A poem I did in the middle of class. Like a doodle in words. Comment so I may improvise.
- Date: 04/12/2010
- Tags: chrissy
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kaylee Ukulele - 12/11/2010
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I appreciate the comments ;
Don't mind the critique. (:
Yes it is dark , but it's my darkest one. - Report As Spam
- xI run with scissorsx - 12/10/2010
- Whoa. That's really, really good. I seriously loved how macabre it was.
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- Fille aux Cheveux de Lin - 07/11/2010
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This just reminds me of those irritating chain messages, like:
sarah anderson
died
if
you
don't
send this on to 500 more, you'll die too.
You get the picture.
Well, the poem sounds like it was totally based on that, and that way it sounds a lot like the chain message.
I dislike the bland rhyming words - 'three, me'. 'Hard, yard'.
But, well... it's dark. That's all I can say. - Report As Spam
- Airayla - 07/01/2010
- Very sad but great portrayal of her situation. You captured it well without giving it all away in the beginning. keeps the reader hooked till the end. Great poem!
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- Xx_Love_Lost_Forever_xX - 06/22/2010
- that was so sad it almost made me cry
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- Gardeford Superior - 06/07/2010
- Why has voting ended sad
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