Pain

• Artist: Proteragon
• Description: This poem is about the "PAIN" he felt.
  Read it to understand.
  1st Entry (I'm a newbie to this)
  This poem is copyrighted.
• Date: 05/19/2009
• Tags: pain fantasy

Alone he stood on broken statues of stone,
No one else, he stood alone.
And looked upon that which he had wrought
The terror in his people's hearts
The legends all been ripped apart
His broken sword lay at his side
His thoughts strayed only at one place
to perish, or to live; or die?
And so he looked for one last time
Before he fell, lightly like a leaf, to earth,
And no one heard of him again,
Besides the voices of the dead.


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Comments

[coople11]

5/5
I'm not a fan either but you have to admit, that its cool

[dicej]

I'm not a fan of this stuff but this is awesome.
I just came down here for tha gold.

[Shimmer_bunny]

wow! you are an awsome poet. hope you make more i'll be reading.

[Tales Of A Crayon]

o.o

[Proteragon]

Thanks guys tell your friendz.

[1R a n g i k u0]

TT__TT that was soo sad but really good! TT__TT

[wuffles123]

wow tats really good >=3