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You see me crying
But you dont come
You see the agony all over my face
But still you dont come
Everybody sees...they dont care
you dont care
you did this to me
my heart is broken
you took the peices
and threw them away
now you have someone new
you dont care about me
nobody cares about me now
with you gone how can i breath?
my chest is hollow
I cant sleep for if i do i will c u with her
how will i get over you?
i cant get over you.
now im just broken
- Title: Broken
- Artist: ImaTiffy
- Description: ummm well i worte this least year i was hurt really bad and now im startin to get ova it.....
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: broken
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ll OrGaSmIc TiC-tAc ll - 12/16/2008
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I dont think it was good i dont think it really had a purpose i mean i think it should of been longer but that's just me and apparently the chics below me like it so i guess its just me.
Good luck with your poem hun ^-^ - Report As Spam
- ImaTiffy - 12/10/2008
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um people!!!!!
i need ur comments i need to c if i need to work on my poems!!!
plez comment - Report As Spam
- Meredithcullen123 - 12/06/2008
- you must kno how i feel Cuz ily Tiffy awesome poem!
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